studious samus

very true. Personally, I find it annoying to have to spend quanities of time with idiots :p it is very hard to be intelligent and social at the same time ...

I like it. Everything Sophie said was good ^^ except i like repetition. Easy to remember, hard to stop thinking about. It is nice though when you always have a ...

i like it. "Would you think of me late at night would you mind if I invaded your dreams would it be bad would you be glad " i think ...

man i love a good story like this! these days there just are to many happily ever afters. Gota love a good ol villain wins sometimes :]. The only mistake ...

very good. i love the line "But affection can quickly spoil when it isn’t refrigerated." I busted out laughing [in a good way]. So true but to me such a ...

ello ms. Chera very compelling story! the very sentence was enough to draw me in, enough to make me wonder. and you described the area beautifully if a little bit ...

i like it! so true But i was and still am a little confused on a line. "Not now there are no people" double negative? maybe add a comma or ...

very nice. i agree with the earlier posts, with the need to capitalize God at the end since you did before, and maybe you should expound on the idea of ...

very good. i especially like how you have described the girl, and well... pretty much everything o.O it is specific enough that i can visualize it in my head, yet ...

its ok... but you used some wrong words. like straight instead of strait. also considering that fairy toung is an unknown language in the book he wouldnt be able to ...

nice! very emotional and it all sounds true. but it makes me wonder. why would you "And wish upon them horrible things"? if you really loved someone wouldnt you want ...

wow. that was an amazing poem. it was extremly deep though... i hope thats not how you are feeling. i love the "And without love,there is no life." because that ...